The Sunday Muse #78
The Sunday Muse is with us once more. Thank you Shay for this interesting prompt.
I had to look twice, then thrice . . .
Today's image is called "The Architect"
and is done by
ERIK JOHANSSON.
Visit him at
https://www.erikjo.com/
CONFUSED PERSPECTIVES
Crumpled paper on the floor,
Attempts at logic by the score.
The architect is 'stretched' it seems
To make sense of his house of dreams.
It works alright until the roof,
And then he thinks, "Another goof!"
Two inside walls, a desk, a floor
Would make some sense with two walls more.
This would solve inside dimensions,
With him inside, with great intentions.
Just like a confused and frightened fly
He tries and tries to work out why
The roof he's drawn looks just not right
No matter which angle meets his sight.
Two more attempts end in crumpled paper.
Just as he thinks, "I'll end this caper".
"Eureka! he shouts, "I believe I've got it
"All my attempts 'til now were not it.
"I know now how Archimedes felt
When he to science his theory dealt.
The roof is strange, I've drawn it wrong.
The length is short, the width is long.
In fact they are drawn out the wrong way
A 90% turn should work out okay.
Then the perspective should work out right.
And not to onlookers be a confusing sight.
Eddie Bluelights
20 October 2019
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For some reason "Would make more sense with two walls more" cracked me up. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shay. You serious gals need a bit of humour in the mix and I love making people laugh.:)
DeleteI enjoyed this, especially the rhythm and rhyming. Loved the line Shay quotes too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry. Glad you liked the humour.. . :)
DeleteAbsolutely a delightful fun read Eddie! I love it when you make us laugh but you also do it with finesse!! 🤩😃
ReplyDeleteThanks Carrie. Like exercising your chuckle muscle . . . :)
DeleteOh, I needed this bit of humor today. The art of the mind sometimes isn't the least bit practical.
ReplyDeleteIt is my pleasure, Susie. Loved writing it. It did not take long at all . . . lol
Deletethe image amazes me... the words do a good job describing my confusion.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Margaret. I was being kind to the architect and hate to see all that crumpled paper. What a waste . . lol
DeleteThis is great!! I hope the cat is threatened by your obviously natural ability to rhyme. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jax. And thanks for your visit.
DeleteNo he and I have our own styles. ☺
Wonderful take on the piece Eddie. An architectural deep dive into the elements of the image, and done effectively with rhyme. Fascinating read.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rob.
DeleteGreat poem, Eddie. The rhyming was wonderful and flowing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara. Glad you liked it. 😊
DeleteYou've got talent, Eddie. A true poet and you know it!
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend,
Blue
P.S. Can I ask you a favor, Eddie? Could you say something nice to my friend Arza? HERE. She's a darker shade of blue but at least I got her to start blogging again. I owe you one! Make that two! You, sir, always make us blue folks smile.
DeleteDammit (PArdon my Swedish), she just changed her address: HERE. Thanks, Eddie!!!! I owe you some Bora juice!
DeleteWill do, Blue. Glad to help in any way I can. Will do so tomorrow. A bit late here now. Speak soon. And less Blue, Blue, promise. 😊
DeleteI promise. And if you want to read a post in which I'm laughing my buttocks off (I can laugh), check out my first behind the scenes post. Join in!
DeleteHi Eddy. I thought I'd drop by and have a look around your blog. You definitely don't need a muse. It's awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Az, Come again. I'll be over too. 🙂
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