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Saturday, 4 January 2020

SUSPENSE



The Sunday Muse #89


Once again Carrie has provided an intriguing prompt for us. Thank you Carrie. Had to let my unconscious do all the work on this one. 



 "Take Me Up"  by Lauren Withrow


SUSPENSE

Take me to my dreams, take me up, I say.
Let each wing beat dictate its true way.
The route to freedom is both light and joy.
Not like this cold dark prison and all its chains.
I am done with this wretched and lonely place
Where I can but claw a little happiness from all its mire.

Where you take me I know not, and do not care
For I know you will ascend swiftly to the clouds
Where the angels sing and faces portray a happy heart. 
 Where light commands final victory to resounding choruses.
Come let us fly together through the elusive gate of time
And dwell in rapture with all whom we have ever loved.




Eddie Bluelights
4 January 2020



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30 comments:

  1. Carrie Van Horn4 January 2020 at 20:22

    A wonderful capturing of the image Eddie! I love it! So glad you joined us!

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    1. Eddie Bluelights4 January 2020 at 20:41

      Thanks Carrie. Glad I joined too :)

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    2. Ben13 May 2020 at 19:19

      Wow is good to be back with my ex again, thank you Dr Ekpen for the help, I just want to let you know that is reading this post in case you are having issues with your lover and is leading to divorce and you don’t want the divorce, Dr Ekpen is the answer to your problem. Or you are already divorce and you still want him/her contact Dr Ekpen the spell caster now on (ekpentemple@gmail.com) and you will be clad you did

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  2. Susie Clevenger4 January 2020 at 21:55

    Oh, take me to dreams. This is so beautiful. The lift I needed today.

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  3. Susan Kane5 January 2020 at 00:35

    Even without the photo, the words say it all.

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  4. Susan5 January 2020 at 05:28

    To be lifted to light and joy! What a gift!

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  5. Sumana Roy5 January 2020 at 14:16

    Love how the picture transforms into such beautiful words. The path to freedom is as wonderful as freedom itself.

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  6. Lochness Lass5 January 2020 at 15:16

    Beautiful. Thank you. B

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  7. Sherry Blue Sky5 January 2020 at 17:31

    This is beautiful. I, too, think of being lifted up and reunited with those I have lost. Beautifully done.

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  8. R's Rue5 January 2020 at 23:04

    Beautiful.

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  9. C. Sandlin6 January 2020 at 02:37

    Great bouncy, floating rhythm and the hope that accompanies the words is lovely.

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  10. purplepeninportland.com9 January 2020 at 01:18

    "I am done with this wretched and lonely place
    Where I can but claw a little happiness from all its mire."

    Two amazing lines from a wonderful poem!

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  11. Fireblossom10 January 2020 at 17:49

    Oh how you do go on, Eddie. Me, I'll be bringing marshmallows to roast!

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  12. Blue Grumpster21 January 2020 at 20:15

    Wow, Eddie! You, sir, are a true poet.

    Blue

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  13. R's Rue27 February 2020 at 10:24

    Beautiful prose.

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  14. Melissa Baker4 June 2020 at 02:14

    Hey Eddie, just thought I'd let you know I popped in to read a few of your blogs today! Have a great day and keep inspiring us!!

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    1. Eddie Bluelights17 July 2021 at 11:44

      Glad you did, Melissa. I am on instagram now. Same name.

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