Another Magpie Tale
Prompt set by Tess MAG227
Some dude with a cat around 1850s
Tintype provided by Tess Kincade, Magpie Tales
We sense a coming nightmare; a holocaust.
This cloned nonet recoils in unison.
All nine predict blood and imminent danger.
All nine stand resolute together,
unified by razor sharp sixth senses.
All nine know within their souls,
. . . . this is not a place we want to be.
Nine lives think as one and cannot all be wrong;
for we are unanimous in fear, that rarest of perceptions,
which speaks and warns that something is far amiss.
A man like you, who cannot face the light,
is dark by nature and is no friend of mine.
I can see it all, etched deep within in your soul;
. . . . unbridled, abounding cruelty!
My mind shows an image of self preservation.
My tail is up and my back is arched,
and I sound a feline warning to you.
Back off - I do not trust your face!
I do not like you!
You scare me!
. . . and I cannot stay in this darkness.
All my senses rebel, as if you are anti-matter.
I panic as I scratch and claw my way to freedom.
I cannot remain with you, for you are pure evil,
and I know if I stayed even a heartbeat in time
. . . . . . you would kill or harm me.
You must remain here alone,
framed in time and space for eternity.
And in due season I must die,
one by one with my other lives.
. . . . or fail, and become an everlasting tormented hologram.
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I had to think long and hard about this one to find an idea and a starting point.
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I've read half a dozen variations of this prompt with this same photograph, and yours is by far the most thoughtful, the best.
ReplyDeleteThank you Stephen . . . probalbly only that our minds are more in tune.
DeleteI am looking forward to seeing the others :)
poor kitty so scared- you captured the feelings and thoughts so very well. Me? I was just my silly self! Thanks for visiting my blog. Have a lovely week.
ReplyDeleteHi Kathe . . . Thanks for the encouraging comment. I liked your as well . . . enjoy your week too . . . :) Eddie
DeleteOH and I meant to say also that your header photo of a tulip tree? magnolia? is exquisite.
ReplyDeleteAnd that you for your kind words about my header - magnolia in my front garden . . . :)
DeleteWow, I had to read this twice there is a lot in between the lines. That sixth sense will always show you the way..
ReplyDeleteHi Truedessa - thank you for reading it once and thank you for reading it again. 6th sense is useful sometimes and I have told the cat to never get into a picture . . . lol
DeleteClever take on the element of the nine lives...nice one Eddie...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess :)
DeleteI like that you took the cat's point of view... or at least a feline perspective.
ReplyDeleteYes I thought the cat's viewpoint might be interesting . . . thanks Theresa . . . :)
DeleteThe cat sure has to scat
ReplyDeleteCan't put up with that
Scratch and claw
Even a little gnaw
Use nine lives to get away
Have a brighter day
The cat was right
DeleteTo put up a fight
And scratch with all his might
To give that dood such a fright!!
lol
yikes....dying one life at a time....
ReplyDeletecats have a way about them...they know
when one has an evil spirit...
that is for sure....
Thanks Brian . . . :)
DeleteThat was worth the long think! ' Nine lives' gave you a great perspective on the image...
ReplyDeleteThanks Pen . . . glad you liked it . . . :)
Delete0oooooh! I love the feliney focus in this write, Eddie. My own moggie would agree with you, too! He's an expert at sussing people out!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helena . . . . cats certainly are intuitive creatures . . :)
Delete...not sure I'd want nine lives personally, but great write this!
ReplyDeleteAgree - one life is enough but cats are supposed to have 9.
DeleteThank you V . . . I am greatly encouraged . . . :)
I bet you'e seen plenty of people who seemed to have nine lives!
ReplyDeleteWell I did not work on A&E so I was not at the front end and not nearly qualified to do so, Those guys saw the real action. I was on Patient Transfer but sometimes even that had us on our toes. . . . :)
DeleteHi Eddie I think you have explored an aspect of the prompt so very well. I tended to ignore the cat, says something about me and cats I think. Enjoyed your take.
ReplyDeleteThank you Michaelt :)
DeleteOh I like the nine lives of kitty woes and your vivid words complete the edges of darkness that completely surround this photo prompt! Bravo.
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen . . . lovely compliment . . . you are too kind :)
DeleteBrilliant!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Marguerite - cats are very intuitive and of course if you were in that picture I would say, "Meow!" and start purring. . . . . lol :)
DeleteEddie, I'm a cat Peep. So interesting , a cat's perspective on people, and it rings true to me.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to write more, but spent this hour listening to Magic Flute. I played in opera orchestra between symphony seasons, so I cannot write while listening to Mozart--I "playing along with the gang--grin! Thanks.
Thank you Steve
DeleteHow interesting about the orchestra - I would really enjoy that if I had the talent. The Magic Flute is my favourite opera and I believe Mozart was the greatest composer. Shame he started 'decomposing' when he died . . . . sorry that pun is really awful. . . . lol
Seriously imagine what misic he would have produced had he lived until 70 and not just 35. ~ Eddie
I have cats for pets and I understand this...good one.
ReplyDeleteThank you . . . .enjoyed writing it . . :)
DeleteBrilliant work. I love the nine lives approach. I saw the darkness too but alas, I could not word it well.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gail . . . . and keep writing . . :)
DeleteHis crooked grin did not charm the kitty. Good for him and all his life. It is dangerous to love, to like, to be closed to a face wanted face that surrounds itself only by darkness. Without balance, there is death.
ReplyDeleteThank you Magaly . . . :)
DeleteWell, I feel as though I'm running out of lives!
ReplyDeleteMaggie x
Nuts in May
. . . . Well you are not a cat . . . .
DeleteEddie x
I feel smarter all ready!
ReplyDeleteThanks Eva . . . :)
DeleteThis was wonderful. I loved the end, a hologram being most dreadful. Then again, I did just watch the video with Michael Jackson's hologram and it was very scary indeed. I'm afraid it didn't do justice to his musical talent. Loved your take.
ReplyDeleteThank you Donetta . . . . . encouraging words . . . on my way to see your blog . . . Eddie :)
Delete"This cloned nonet" -- intriguing perspective. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you ~T~ .. . .nice to meet you ~ Eddie :)
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